he.searches(for.a.cable);
Your writing derranges in the most impressive, philosophical yet heartfelt way possible .
Thank you so much Jeanne, appreciate it. You’ve made my day!
That last line stings. Wow.
thank you for staying to the very end, appreciate it!!
This is excellent!
Breathless
The imagery
“curtains
learn
to.drown”
It’s enhanced by the punctuation too.
Sending you good vibes.
I agree - punctuation armour felt needed here, not only for visuals but perhaps to coat the vulnerability, if ever so slightly.
Thanks for the good vibes; sending them right back at you. Let’s have a smashing monday’ing!
I hear you.
You’re most welcome.
Thank you.
Indeed 🙂
This is unique really
Thank you for reading and kind words @Bertold Lagaro, appreciate it!
this one 'stings'...
taking it as positive, thank you!
it is positive, this piece hits. very well written.
Your writing derranges in the most impressive, philosophical yet heartfelt way possible .
Thank you so much Jeanne, appreciate it. You’ve made my day!
That last line stings. Wow.
thank you for staying to the very end, appreciate it!!
This is excellent!
Breathless
The imagery
“curtains
learn
to.drown”
It’s enhanced by the punctuation too.
Sending you good vibes.
I agree - punctuation armour felt needed here, not only for visuals but perhaps to coat the vulnerability, if ever so slightly.
Thanks for the good vibes; sending them right back at you. Let’s have a smashing monday’ing!
I hear you.
You’re most welcome.
Thank you.
Indeed 🙂
This is unique really
Thank you for reading and kind words @Bertold Lagaro, appreciate it!
this one 'stings'...
taking it as positive, thank you!
it is positive, this piece hits. very well written.