You really locked something real in there. A specific failure. Not universal despair..this despair. It knows already what it lost and then refuses the consolation of forgetting. Excellent!
Another banger Diva - the syntax feels somatic, like I’m trying to reconstruct shattered glass. Each fragment is beautiful, but together they reveal something devastating. Tens ✨
this one lands heavy… i see you in it. no need to ask… and when i finish it i keep reading like it’s still running. what i find is my own subconscious taking over the code and running it on the white space, where you left everything unsaid. i already know your reply “what’s in the white space?” …and can i tell you " it's everything without telling you anything" that’s how the syntax works
This goes hard.
thank you so much noc x
This while section had my mind reeling. I feel you, M. x
fibonacci.hand(unreliable);
selfish.harvest(of.scent);
neck.pinned(cerebellum);
trying.heavy(me.into.carpet);
Thank you T., fibonacci effect x
this went from yoga in the park to wtf is going on… you may find me asking anyway, in dreams. sorry. &&
absolutely adore your comments pen n. I frequently ask myself the same questions. coincidence? I don’t think so;)
absolutely love your poetry momo. process over outcome, experiments at its finest.
Boom!
“hands.braided(in.prayer);”
“god.left(this.house);
two.nights.ago;”
and Fibonacci
Enigmatic, and excellent as always, M 🙂 x
I had a feeling you might like Fibonacci. Thank you M 🙂 x
You intuited well.
You’re most welcome 🙂 x
You really locked something real in there. A specific failure. Not universal despair..this despair. It knows already what it lost and then refuses the consolation of forgetting. Excellent!
Locked specific failure. Thank you @Jaap Stijl x
Fragments building a civilisation ♠️🐦⬛🐈⬛
Thank you so much @HOUSEOFLIVINGART 🖤♠️
abdomen.twisted(inversion.suspended);
milk.curtain(billows.inwards);
emulating(breeze.profanities);
my favorite lines! I keep going back to this verse. Excellent!
Thank you so much @Silent Words with Cynthia Wong x
Another banger Diva - the syntax feels somatic, like I’m trying to reconstruct shattered glass. Each fragment is beautiful, but together they reveal something devastating. Tens ✨
Thank you so much @Luna💫 x
Intense
Thank you @Ray Sweatman x
Pro tip: This hits harder with Radiohead.
Thank you so much @T.S. Morgan, excellent tip x
People hunger for transcendence even while denying the word. They seek it in romance, politics, work, and art, then wonder why each altar cracks.
Who are those people?
Spiritual but not religious.
So good!! 🖤
Thank you 🖤
fucking genius as always
Flattered, thank you so much @Vianne Armour x
this one lands heavy… i see you in it. no need to ask… and when i finish it i keep reading like it’s still running. what i find is my own subconscious taking over the code and running it on the white space, where you left everything unsaid. i already know your reply “what’s in the white space?” …and can i tell you " it's everything without telling you anything" that’s how the syntax works
you.don’t.tell;
i.don’t.ask;
syntax.preserved(thriving);
The self is partly discovered and partly built. Anyone who denies either side ends up trapped by fate or vanity.
Love your take @PH Tollbooth. Thank you so much x
Thanks.
pretty with Rx.... xxx
pretty damn right xxx