A fantastic poem with a great ending. Unexpected and brilliant. Not only do I love theatrical based poetry and writing, I am always enthralled by your style, I think you could write anything and it'd be a banger just because of the artistry behind it. We need to collaborate sometime, you have so much to teach me, and I have so much to learn. Keep killing it.
Tainted with the mark of beauty QUEEN 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤🖤🖤🖤
My new favourite! Like a cabaret body horror staged under interrogation lights. Brutal and strangely elegant.
I love the pairing of brutal and elegant, perfect. Thank you @Jaap STIJL
one woman act; you are one of those unique women that doubtlessly cannot be doubled;
tainted.
First person to answer my question - thank you @lchristopher x
Anytime, @MoTy! Xx
Magic
Can’t argue with that, thank you @Ray Sweatman
... yes.you<did>
but. that.is/ok+
Haunting. The body becoming spectacle while the self slowly disappears underneath the performance of it.
Thank you so much Suzanne. The show must go on, always.
beautiful and claustrophobic!
Claustrophobic thank you @NOTARA x
A performance of victimhood where ownership of body and agency fractures into painful spectacle.
Thank you so much Dr @Gan. Will collect my prescription at a counter x
Always a pleasure reading you
Thank you very much John. Likewise x
…when one can’t look away.
…masochistic but understandable x
sweating(over.heineken); laughing
I’m just funny like that. You’re welcome @UpsilonA
Dense. Tight. Fantastic!! 🖤
I absolutely love ‚tight’, it’s my first one as well. Thank you @wildflower
My pleasure, MoTy!!
Glim-mers // flick-ers
I don’t kn-ow if it’s safe out here
al-ways / toujours / al-ways
beau-ty // turns into perfor-mance
beau-ty becomes a signal error
n-ever safe
al-ways / end-ways
perfor-mance
confor-mance
let.this.pass;
bleach.hot(backbone);
throat(in.exile);
gag(over-recited.lines);
bitter.spit;
- boom!!
enigmatic
dark(?)
erotic(?)
visions
what is this place(?)
I’m on the M-Train 🙂 x
No destination on this high-speed train. Hold tight - don’t lose your ticket. Thanks M.🙂 x
That’s cool with me.
I should be okay, I’ve got a good grip.
You’re most welcome, M 🙂 x
Never doubted your grip. Always worth having some assurance though 🙂 x
Great to have not been doubted.
And always happy to assure 🙂 x
A fantastic poem with a great ending. Unexpected and brilliant. Not only do I love theatrical based poetry and writing, I am always enthralled by your style, I think you could write anything and it'd be a banger just because of the artistry behind it. We need to collaborate sometime, you have so much to teach me, and I have so much to learn. Keep killing it.
I think this is my first ‚banger’. Thank you so much Kerr. I’m absolutely flattered. We can both learn from each other x
The first of many, I know. Banger after banger after banger…
Absolutely, iron sharpens iron after all. 🖤🩸
spectacle died. damn. 🖤🖤
The light went down but the spectacle never really ends. Damn indeed x
Damn damn damn.