slow_resonance(of.deep_bell);
your words and the picture together! 🤌🏻perfect combo✨
Thank you so much @erin. Very sweet of you✨
Sheeesshhh reading your poetry is like having a movie played in my mind, the imagery that you’re able to conjure up!
Thank you Olly, this means more than you know.
word.
don’t say.
Really evocative! And some excellent lines and stanzas. Boom as always, M 🙂
Every "Boom" from you makes me happy. Glad it didn't offend - metaphor and all.
Boom boom boom boom…
I’m glad to hear that 😊
Not at all 🙂
Beautiful alignment of expression of soul and truth 🖤🖤🖤♟️♟️♟️
Thank you so much Sevda🖤
(new_scent).
i’m addicted. this hits.
What a privilege to be your dealer - anytime pen n. Thank you so much x
I absolutely loved this poem, especially the way it is presented. And the line.. barbed_wire(at.my.jaw)—
tightening(whenever.i.speak);
Thank you @Damian Hendrickson for your kind words. Gratitude!
beautifully done, Moty.
As poetic and thought provoking and intense and chilling and gripping as always.
Feels like it could be read dozens of times, and bring something new out for the reader each time.
Thank you Forest, your earthy words feed my soul. Appreciate you!
I appreciate you too MoTy!
Excellent writing. So glad that towards the end, your poem moved from passive suffering to active rebellion!
The imagery in this poem is just a masterpiece. I can see an image for each line you composed. Spectacular!
My skin splits open.
Cracking. Fracturing bone -
in obedience.
I bow
until my forehead learns the floor.
Sacred obedience.
My tongue burns when I try to kiss you.
Lava spills from my stomach
in the middle of the night.
Still I burn -
my mouth fixed to your body.
Your icon hangs above my childhood bed.
Obedience.
And it seems you’re fluent in more than five languages, since you’re speaking mine too.
Perhaps we all carry secret languages within us - waiting only for the openness to answer when they are heard.
Jeanne Vessantra you are absolutely astonishing!!!!
Thank you for reading so closely, Beckie. I guess the rebellion is really just a form of protection, when you strip it back (that’s me being totally honest).
Thank you ink, you’re too kind. Melting over this comment.
your words and the picture together! 🤌🏻perfect combo✨
Thank you so much @erin. Very sweet of you✨
Sheeesshhh reading your poetry is like having a movie played in my mind, the imagery that you’re able to conjure up!
Thank you Olly, this means more than you know.
word.
don’t say.
Really evocative! And some excellent lines and stanzas. Boom as always, M 🙂
Every "Boom" from you makes me happy. Glad it didn't offend - metaphor and all.
Boom boom boom boom…
I’m glad to hear that 😊
Not at all 🙂
Beautiful alignment of expression of soul and truth 🖤🖤🖤♟️♟️♟️
Thank you so much Sevda🖤
(new_scent).
i’m addicted. this hits.
What a privilege to be your dealer - anytime pen n. Thank you so much x
I absolutely loved this poem, especially the way it is presented. And the line.. barbed_wire(at.my.jaw)—
tightening(whenever.i.speak);
Thank you @Damian Hendrickson for your kind words. Gratitude!
beautifully done, Moty.
As poetic and thought provoking and intense and chilling and gripping as always.
Feels like it could be read dozens of times, and bring something new out for the reader each time.
Thank you Forest, your earthy words feed my soul. Appreciate you!
I appreciate you too MoTy!
Excellent writing. So glad that towards the end, your poem moved from passive suffering to active rebellion!
The imagery in this poem is just a masterpiece. I can see an image for each line you composed. Spectacular!
My skin splits open.
Cracking. Fracturing bone -
in obedience.
I bow
until my forehead learns the floor.
Sacred obedience.
My tongue burns when I try to kiss you.
Lava spills from my stomach
in the middle of the night.
Still I burn -
my mouth fixed to your body.
Your icon hangs above my childhood bed.
Obedience.
And it seems you’re fluent in more than five languages, since you’re speaking mine too.
Perhaps we all carry secret languages within us - waiting only for the openness to answer when they are heard.
Jeanne Vessantra you are absolutely astonishing!!!!
Thank you for reading so closely, Beckie. I guess the rebellion is really just a form of protection, when you strip it back (that’s me being totally honest).
Thank you ink, you’re too kind. Melting over this comment.