I grew up in Switzerland, in the first sentences my mind went to a TB hospital in the Alps, it gave a interesting juxtaposition. Today most are abandoned. Loved it!
There is SO MUCH in every thickened musical note here. I find myself holding my breath have to stop to take in some unsaturated air, start over, and read it again and again red and gasping.
this one flows. pending; anticipating; pacing; beautiful sensations absorbed in your fascinations. tuesday mornings. god, i love this.
Thank you so much @pen n. bolsillo x
I like those moments where the clinical vocabulary and the body genuinely fuse
Excellent, M - boom! (as always)
I particularly dug the stanza below:
“pocket.lopsided(plundered);
coins;
tobacco;
delusion;
sheen.of.face(not.mine);”
Feels like a list of contents. Not much in there, yet it all counts. Thank you for the boom M x
A most excellent list of contents!
You’re most welcome, M 🙂 x
The body, the institution, and the self dissolving.
wow.speechless (ripped_shredded)
gratitude.multiplying(thanks.birthing);
I love your style MoTy, always so visceral!
Thank you so much @Mara Ellison x
Coming in hot with discomfort-
“(obstructed.catheter)”
And it feels like the 60s and we purposely went down the rabbit hole -
“perverse.hallucinogen(slaps.my.face);”
Maybe the only conclusion revolves around parentheses
Trouble is, I’m not sure my favourite lines to pick, they are all so intertwined, love it
Love “hot with discomfort”, might consider adding to my bio. Also parentheses direction is spot on. Thank you Gub x
Totally should, something like your style too, hot.with(discomfort)
You feel through ever word read of yours to live in centre of your internal world fantastic ♠️♠️♠️🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
Thank you my Black Queen 🖤
Consciousness debug, defrag commencing… The wait between now and Tuesday feels infinite. Your maze of a mind endlessly fascinates, Diva ✨
Thank you so much Luna. I do agree, the wait feels infinite. The secret is that Tuesday keeps reoccurring x
I grew up in Switzerland, in the first sentences my mind went to a TB hospital in the Alps, it gave a interesting juxtaposition. Today most are abandoned. Loved it!
No wonder. That first line sounds medical enough. Thank you, Swiss sister x
It’s really fun to see where this takes my brain. Especially love the last line!
Thank you @Deer Girl for wandering through these lines. The last one appreciates it the most x
There is SO MUCH in every thickened musical note here. I find myself holding my breath have to stop to take in some unsaturated air, start over, and read it again and again red and gasping.
Steady @Travis Lowe. In and out. We cannot afford to lose you to such a trivial breathing incident. Thank you so much x
Oh the sick visuals I get>>>
balancing.edge(already.gone);
teeth.clenched(ticker.vomit);
Sick to hear:) thank you so much @Bougie Hippie x
absolutely SWOON!!!!
Thank you Foxy x