14 Comments
User's avatar
Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

I want collision

But la collision

Makes me afraid.

Planet

In collision universe -

When we break our names,

Fragments of ourselves

Scatter into orbit.

MoTy's avatar

in cosmic unpredictability

fragments might meet again

collide

float weightless

feed off fear -

then collide all over again

Mothchewedgirl's avatar

Obsessed with this

MoTy's avatar

Thank you so much, glad you liked it. Appreciate restacks too, truly.

Michael John Hulley II's avatar

dark

beauty

this is excellent.

I think you may like some of the dark pieces I was writing in about 2010 - there’s a similar vibe - similar imagery.

Some of the pieces were used by a music producer I know. He recorded me reading them and used them as samples. We also performed the pieces live at raves.

I’m thinking of posting a piece about those times, and starting to post some of the music.

Hopefully soon 🙂

MoTy's avatar

This should be very interesting, it takes massive bravery to perform spoken poetry (not to mention at the rave). Can’t wait to see it!

Live as Art's avatar

Sharpe edges are golden beautiful expressed 💎💎💎♣️♣️♣️🦢🦢🦢

Notara's avatar

This is incredible

MoTy's avatar

Thank you, melting 🫠

Charlie Boy's avatar

This a whole other level, fantastic

MoTy's avatar

You’re too kind, thank you so much!

Nimila's avatar

Wow, simply mindblowing. I really love your original takes on poetry ☺️

MoTy's avatar

Thank you so much. I’m blown away by your comment too☺️

User's avatar
Comment removed
Feb 6
Comment removed
MoTy's avatar

Thank you @Soulhunting for poetic unison, all is well!