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Michael John Hulley II's avatar

Another excellent piece!

(Again) I’m loving the rhythm

And I particularly liked this line:

“pulling.miracles(from.clorox.air);” 🙂

MoTy's avatar

Sanctus, Sanctus! Thank you very much for reading and commenting Michael😎

Michael John Hulley II's avatar

Holy Holy Holy (Silk Cut) smokes!

Haha - you’re most welcome 🙂

Bruce Robb's avatar

The form took me by surprise, yet I worked through it and enjoyed doing so. It would be easy to dismiss what you created as an artifice, but that would be a mistake. Thank you for making me think and wonder!

MoTy's avatar

Thank you for giving syntax a chance (and me). Appreciate it. Will read your work on my way to work. How fitting:)