This is just brilliant, it hit me right in the gut. Wow wow. You also know I’m a huge fan of your style and structure and combined I really felt all those trapped emotions I used to avoid. Thank you so much for being here, for writing, for sharing and for supporting🖤🙏🏻🫂
This feels claustrophobic as hell. Like being trapped inside a body that’s glitching. The tech language mixed with skin and spiders is proper unsettling. Some lines really stick with me, especially “jaw pressure calibrates me” and “rewrite(my.code).” It reads like trauma compressed into fragments. Dark but sharp.
I love how you articulated this. “Tumult crawls through skin… teeth leave bruised script… jaw pressure calibrates me.” The way you capture tension, danger, and intimacy all at once is electrifying. Every line hits with such precision, like the poem itself is alive, breathing, and dangerous. “I peel my face open… riot… too loud… too urgent.” This is haunting, fierce, and unforgettable, I’m in awe of your writing🌸
I like the form and style of this poem. Almost written like code or short program - changing my thinking like a poem should.
Thank you Damian, that was my intention. It’s structured like code, but thinks like a poem. Glad you like it.
This is just brilliant, it hit me right in the gut. Wow wow. You also know I’m a huge fan of your style and structure and combined I really felt all those trapped emotions I used to avoid. Thank you so much for being here, for writing, for sharing and for supporting🖤🙏🏻🫂
Thank you. Likewise. I almost wish you didn't understand it quite so well. Brave moves today🖤🙏🫂
Brave moves indeed🫂❤️🔥
visceral and intense and poetic and so very real.
Very beautifully done.
Thank you Forest Night, melting in every sense. Much, much, much appreciated!
I’m not sure I was ready to read this. Thank you for sharing
Thank you for reading and sorry for the lack of warning. I’m sure you’ve already recovered though:)
holie shit.
This is my first „holie shit”, much appreciated!
Fantastic visual poetry!
Thank you so much Rea, means a lot!
This feels claustrophobic as hell. Like being trapped inside a body that’s glitching. The tech language mixed with skin and spiders is proper unsettling. Some lines really stick with me, especially “jaw pressure calibrates me” and “rewrite(my.code).” It reads like trauma compressed into fragments. Dark but sharp.
Yes. Trapped was the point. Thank you for staying inside it. Appreciate it, truly.
Love/This.keep^good/Wrk.ex
syntax.appreciated; thank_you;
I love how you articulated this. “Tumult crawls through skin… teeth leave bruised script… jaw pressure calibrates me.” The way you capture tension, danger, and intimacy all at once is electrifying. Every line hits with such precision, like the poem itself is alive, breathing, and dangerous. “I peel my face open… riot… too loud… too urgent.” This is haunting, fierce, and unforgettable, I’m in awe of your writing🌸
Chihiro, you must know the feeling is mutual.
Thank you so much - my day is immediately brighter😊
Dark
Beauty
I love counting beauty spots…
I'd have imagined so, Michael. Not only a poet, but a mathematician too.
Indeed haha.
I have been known to rigorously study shape 🙂
geometry student keen on vinegar crisps
Just a couple of steps away from being an overweight polymath 🙂
Careful there😁
I know. It’s quite the precipice 🙂
Thank you Cedric, means a lot!