smoking(hot)
how_can(you.be_more_me(than.I.am));
tinfoil_wrapped;
ready_to_inhale;
never.knowing {
I.sense(fumes_from(years.ago));
}
screams.rustle(trapped.decibels);
mouth.stuffed;
silence.stifled;
unspool(my.debris);
turn.it(to_ash);
sift_through(remnants);
find(nothing.worthy);
find(nothing.whole);
same_foil(sharpened.your.scissors);
i.cannot.bear(it);
so.bear(me);
unclench(my.vapour);
i.will.unravel(loudly);
i.will.dissolve(completely);
unable.to.tell—
whose.chest.still.burns;




Stirring emptiness with a straw
Sitting with this drink for ages
Everyone has already gone
Only a spider walks beside the glass
I forget where my home is
Stirring emptiness with a straw
I’m digging your work. I started writing some poetry with unusual punctuation, some time ago.
It’s interesting seeing someone else doing something similar, but different 🙂